Comments on: Chapter 56: Deliverance

By: Rob

Rob — Thu, 08 May 2008 20:43:18 +0000

Glad to hear that. ‘Entranced’ is a great word. I only hope I can keep it up! Thanks for telling me about the typo!

By: Hoboe

Hoboe — Thu, 08 May 2008 13:43:46 +0000

[But as she stood there hypnotised by the dreadful animal, all she “cold” think about was the man in the forest.]

“cold” should be “could”

I’m really entranced by this. I couldn’t slow down like I thought and am now almost caught up.

By: Rob

Rob — Sun, 27 Apr 2008 01:05:21 +0000

Thank you for the kind comments.

And thank you for reading all the way through! If you have any constructive criticisms about the story or awkward plot lines, then please email me.

From what you’ve said before, the story needs to be looked at with someone else’s eyes.

Rob

By: Regina

Regina — Sat, 26 Apr 2008 23:29:02 +0000

Just finished the story myself! Great job so far, can’t wait to see what happens next!

By: Rob

Rob — Fri, 25 Apr 2008 15:30:02 +0000

Thanks for taking the time to read it. You don’t know how good it makes me feel knowing that people actually think I’m doing a good job ;)

By: Walker

Walker — Fri, 25 Apr 2008 01:09:47 +0000

Just finished reading from the beginning today. Very well written story and I’m looking forward to seeing what happens :)

By: Rob

Rob — Thu, 24 Apr 2008 08:39:03 +0000

Thanks! I’m really glad you like it. Thank you for taking the time to comment - it’s really appreciated.

By: Tina

Tina — Wed, 23 Apr 2008 17:43:46 +0000

I just finished catching up and I have to say this is a very well written AWESOME story. I LOVE it! Keep up the great work, I know I will be checking regularly for updates!

By: Rob

Rob — Mon, 21 Apr 2008 15:06:20 +0000

Now that does sound like an interesting idea … but you’ll have to wait and see (obviously).

By: Chad_Writtenfire

Chad_Writtenfire — Mon, 21 Apr 2008 14:37:16 +0000

Interesting version of Herne there. Perhaps it is Fox, some centuries later.